Friday, November 4, 2011

The Girl~First paragraph

We are writing creative stories in computer class and here is the first paragraph of mine.

Chapter 1
   Great… Why do mom and dad always have to fight all the time? I just don’t get how they fight non-stop. It just irritates me and makes me feel like they forget I’m even here. I sit in my room and think of how things used to be when we still lived in Utah. How I loved those days of picnics in the park where we played tag, took pictures, and just had a good time as a whole family and don’t get me started about the family vacations, those were the best!! But now things are starting to change, I’m not sure I’m going to like this change…

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